http://just-drifting-6.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] just-drifting-6.livejournal.com) wrote on December 16th, 2009 at 08:48 am
Thank you for relieving my boredom, omg. And, the fic... What to say, what to say? I loved it, of course. I liked how you split it up, with Dom's POV first, then Adelle, then Dom, etc. and how Dom's POV went backwards, sort of. I also liked how you revealed to us gradually what was going on, that at first we actually thought it was years later, then slowly we learnt it was just a horrible trick. Poor Dominic! God, the guy never gets a break, does he?

I noticed you used the name Hoffman again, like with that other fic you wrote ages ago (that was you, wasn't it?). I kept getting flashbacks to her, even though they're completely different people.

And, lastly, I just adore the beginning and ending. Countless tales have been told about men falling asleep and upon waking, discover that years have passed and the world has changed without them.

This might be one of them.
and then, This is not one of them. Just...wow.
 
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